Jack Straw , Tony Blair , ethnic cleansing and seagulls

[johannes1984]

All right , Democratic Underground , turned me onto blogging .So here is my first blog , I post it here (secretly hoping for nice reviews ) , but officialy hoping for any input and open discussion

It's an article about , well ethnic cleansing , seagulls and those two scoundrells , or politicians , whichever you prefer .

Please if you have a moment to spare , it's my first one , point out all the mistakes , flaws stupidity and such ....it'll save me a lot of trouble .

http://web.mac.com/johannes1984/iWeb/Site/Tale/E791D51F-95C5-487F-81D1-949970ACF99B.html

(the rest of the site , is rather sophomoric and such , so it's the article , i'm proud of , the rest is ....youthfull indiscretion .

Ow , and if you have even more time to spare , let the foreign office know how much you appreciate their meticulous care .

[muriel_volestrangler]

1. One point - you need to change the colours

You're last paragraph is literally unreadable, and the earlier ones are a bit of a strain (and it seems to be impossible to copy the text to the clipboard, which won't encourage other bloggers to talk about it). But the subject matter is a good choice - it's typical of the British government's capitulation to militarism.