Pres Hole [(cartoon)]

[indigobusiness]

Feedback appreciated:

[blackmoonlillith]

1. Love it...

Perhaps you could draw a cowboy hat lying by the side of the hole.

[indigobusiness]

3. Good idea...

I considered that....probably should have. Maybe I'll do a better version if this gets enough good feedback.

[indigobusiness]

11. I just noticed you are new around here. Welcome to DU

Where is Tarpley?

(I should know)

[indigobusiness]

27. BTW Love your alias, Blackmoonlillith...

Did you used to live in Austin? Work at Trudy's?

[Career Prole]

2. LOL! Good one! n/t

[indigobusiness]

4. Thanks...here's another

[donhakman]

5. Anthony

Has a good hand. The captions are weak but can be easily punched up.

[indigobusiness]

6. Punched up?

How? What do you suggest?

[donhakman]

7. remove yehaww

caption: Mr. President is this a policy move, security alert, a meeting with Mr. Cheney or is this just your hidey hole?

Some cartoonists have Bush digging to China etc.

[indigobusiness]

9. Thanks ...

for the feedback.

What about the second one?

[Career Prole]

12. I thought he was referring to the jibe I've heard...

which was along the lines of, "If you find you've dug yourself into a hole, don't keep digging". I could be wrong, though. Sure wouldn't be the first time! :D

[indigobusiness]

14. Right , this a reference to that.

Precisely.

YOu're near Abilene, huh? I am so sorry...be strong.

[Career Prole]

17. My bumperstickers do draw some interesting...reactions. n/t

[Career Prole]

8. Likewise good.

Only change I'd make were it mine is instead of three question marks, I'd go with period, period, exclamation point. Bush needs that exclamation point, it brings out the simple-minded enthusiasm in his eyes. :D

[indigobusiness]

10. Did you see the 2nd cartoon?

Thanks for your opinion.

Any constructive crticism on #2?

There's plenty of good Dem Texicans.

You aren't in East Tx, I hope?

[Career Prole]

13. That was my constructive criticism on #2!

Dang, I'm really bad at this, aren't I?
Nearest city to me over 100,000 pop. is Abilene. I'm pretty close to the middle, I guess. Geographically speaking, of course!:)

[indigobusiness]

15. But, the second one has no !!! marks nor is about digging?

I'm so confused.

The Abyss cartoon...here this one:

[Career Prole]

16. I'm sorry I wasn't clearer...three balloons, three question marks.

I'd go period, period, exclamation point in the three balloons, left to right.:)

[indigobusiness]

18. Oh, I see...

Yeah...you're probably right.

Ever go to the rattlesnake roundup in Sweetwater? Tastes like lizard.

[indigobusiness]

19. I prefer iguana to chicken...

but snake ain't bad...and I'm mostly vegetarian.

What bumper stickers, Prole?

[indigobusiness]

20. Ouch...all that innuendo...wasn't intentional

I'm going to shut up now.

[indigobusiness]

28. delete

delete

[crossroads]

21. Sweet!!!

:kick:

[indigobusiness]

22. Thanks...Great Bucky Fuller quote

what a guy!

[crossroads]

23. He's good.

Hey I just got done reading the other critiques and I think removing the "Yeehaw" is a good idea, it kinda looks out of place. I do like the concept tho. Good work, wish I could do stuff like that! Kudos!
:thumbsup:

[indigobusiness]

24. Thanks...ok...I'll probably remove it.

Maybe I'll put the cowboy hat in its place.

[crossroads]

25. Great idea!!!

I like it... :toast:

[indigobusiness]

29. Thanks

for the feedback.

[notadmblnd]

26. kick

:kick: