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wrote a "persuasive essay" for his 9th grade english class last night. Here is is (I'm so proud!):
Persuasive Essay
The United States of America has always prided itself on it’s democracy throughout history. Democracy is defined by the Webster dictionary as “government by the people; especially : rule of the majority “. By this definition, elections play a huge role in democracy. In fact, a democracy cannot exist without fair, unbiased elections. Looking at recent elections, there is evidence that not all citizens have been able to vote, and the results of the elections have been questioned by many. It is for those two reasons that I believe we should change the way our elections are run. First of all, in order for people to be guaranteed the right to vote, there should be an amendment put in the constitution that gives everyone the right to vote and the right to have their vote be counted. Surprisingly, there is nothing in the constitution now that guarantees people this right. I’m sure that everyone would agree that no American citizen should be without the right to vote. This is the fundamental concept behind democracy. This must be changed. Once every citizen has the constitutional right to vote, there has to be the hardware for this to happen. On election day, voting machines should be allocated based on the amount of people expected to vote in each voting district. In the past elections, some counties in certain states were given too few voting machines for the number of people voting. Some people even had to wait ten hours or more just to cast their vote. Many individuals who had to wait in long lines gave up and left because they had to get to work or get home to their families. They did not get to vote, while at the same time people in other counties had only a ten minute wait. To ensure that everyone has equal opportunity to voting, the voting machines must be allocated properly. Another way to ensure fair elections, is to make sure that those that are in charge of the elections are not biased toward a particular party or candidate. In the last two presidential elections, the outcome of the election was decided in one state- in 2000 it was Florida, and in 2004 it was Ohio. The person in charge of elections in every state is the Secretary of State. In both states, the Secretary of State (Katherine Harris in Florida and Kenneth Blackwell in Ohio) were major contributors to one party’s candidate. In fact, Kenneth Blackwell was the leader of one candidate’s campaign in Ohio. In order for elections results to be trusted by all the people, those who run the elections must not have a stake in it’s outcome. In our last election, 80% of our country used electronic voting machines to cast votes. Unbelievably, the majority of the voting machines leave no paper trail. This must be changed. The lack of a paper trail makes it impossible to verify the votes, if a recount is needed. For all we know, a vote for one candidate could be recorded as a vote for the other. Having a paper trail will not only assure each individual voter that they voted for the person they meant to vote for, but there will also be the means to recount the votes if the results are close. It is amazing that this is not a requirement in the elections. How can people feel secure that their vote was properly cast and counted if there is absolutely no way to verify it? There is no reason why having a paper trail would be difficult or expensive to do. Common machines such as ATM’s do it for every transaction. In order to have verification of election results, paper trails are a must. Finally, another problem with the voting machines we currently use for U.S. elections is that they are manufactured and distributed by private companies. The companies could easily program the machines to switch votes from one candidate to another, like I mentioned above. It seems ridiculous that this might happen- but why not prevent that possibility altogether? Currently, all of the owners of the voting machine companies in this country are major contributors to one political party. I believe that the voting machines should be publicly owned, so the possibility of fraud is not an issue. The machines and their programs should also be checked regularly by unbiased people. This would make voting more accurate and fair. Taking some or all of the steps I mentioned in reforming our election process would make our elections fair and verifiable. I have a hard time understanding how anyone- Republican or Democrat would resist making these changes unless they had something to hide. Making sure that everyone is able to vote and that every vote is fairly cast and counted ensures that our elected officials truly represent the people. That is the most fundamental part of our democracy.
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