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GeorgeBushytail Donating Member (862 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Sep-08-05 09:56 PM
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Activists and Writers - Please critique the content of www.bushville.org
www.bushville.org

It's about the "9/11 Build Bushville, DC" civil disobedience.

I'd like to know what you like and don't like about it.

Even edit nits. Long days here.

The style stays dead simple.

GBT

DU thread on Bushville:
http://www.democraticunderground.com/discuss/duboard.php?az=show_topic&forum=104&topic_id=4699756
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titoresque Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Sep-08-05 10:00 PM
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1. I don't have a lot to
add as far as what should be changed. I think it's wonderful! I do think the change you made in wording works well!
Awesome and printable!

Thanks so much for all your hard work with this.....would love to see this take off!
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fed-up Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Sep-08-05 10:16 PM
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2. How about "participate in" instead of "commit"
"Commit" and "crime" seem to be tie together automatically in my brain

emphasis and all wording should be about NON-Violence
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GeorgeBushytail Donating Member (862 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Sep-08-05 10:47 PM
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3. bulls-eye
Thanks.

Please spread the word.
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GeorgeBushytail Donating Member (862 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Sep-08-05 10:49 PM
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4. Done. Good eye.
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