Dear Sirs:
I am appalled that Subway would associate itself with a clearly political and partisan piece of propaganda like the "freedom walk". The purpose of the march is clearly to link 9/11 with the war in Iraq and to shore up support for this miserable, lying Administration. I hope Subway realizes that there are millions of people like me that see this war for what it truly is - a lie and a tragedy. I will never support a company in any way helps to perpetuate a lie that has killed almost 2,000 Americans and over 100,000 Iraqis. Not only will I never go into a Subway franchise again, I will never buy Subway after footbal and baseball games for the kids, for business meetings or for parties. It is a shame because you guys make a good product, but it isn't good enough for me to sell my soul.
Suggested edits in purple for the same reasons as my earlier post in this thread:
Dear Safeway:
I am appalled that Subway would associate itself with a clearly political and partisan event like the "Freedom Walk". The purpose of the march is clearly to link 9/11 with the war in Iraq and to shore up support for this increasingly unpopular Administration. I hope Subway realizes that there are millions of people like me that see this war for what it truly is - a lie and a tragedy. I will never support a company in any way helps to perpetuate a lie that has killed almost 2,000 Americans and over 100,000 Iraqis. Not only will I never go into a Subway franchise again, I will never buy Subway after footbal and baseball games for the kids, for business meetings or for parties. It is a shame because you make a good product.
Note that I suggest keeping the phrase "a lie and a tragedy" while removing "miserable, lying". The former is a statement of a considered opinion. The latter is loaded phraseology, hence propaganda, which will earn you kudos at DU but will be less effective achieving your objective with Safeway.
Write your local stores too, so they know that the head office is hurting their business.