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listenup Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-24-03 07:09 PM
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It was afternoon
It was early evening
when I knew the news
that would be whispered tonight
I was quiet all day due to
a feeling and those thoughts
of others views and with
hindsight and some foresight
I was quiet all day with hope
that nothing would be whispered
no reason to feel blue
it's alright

It became evening with no whispers
with no news tonight
still questioning is it all right
to be quiet
tonight?

thanks for reading. Just wanted to write something again off the top of my noggin.

Have a happy night!
If you have some words to put out there/here - I would like to read them.
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ayeshahaqqiqa Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-24-03 07:16 PM
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1. Thank you
The tree bows low
As the breeze of Muse passes by.
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Padraig18 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-24-03 07:19 PM
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2. From my 'blue period'
i miss you

i miss you
as i also miss
the happiness i once knew
i long each and every day for
the old you
the nice boy
the one i would have grown to love
i miss your touch
like rain on a new bud
i miss your voice
the one that spoke to me by choice
i thought i needed you
but now i'm learning to do without
everythings a deeper shade of blue
no one seems to hear me shout
i miss you
i need you

:)
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newyawker99 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Sep-25-03 09:49 AM
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5. Congrats Padraig18!! 200 posts
:toast:
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SOteric Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-24-03 07:35 PM
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3. Ember, Ember, Inferno, Flame
Did you wake me?
Or I, you?

Perhaps is was the sneeze
I tried to muffle
in the billows of soft down
That float over us
Through cold night.

The awakening was
A slow untangling
From the webs of dream.
Then passion took its own
Sweet time as well -- at first
Beginning with gentle touch
But building rapidly
To fierce breathlessness
And final rushing cries.

An intensity of contact
That's always amazing
Beyond understanding.
How that cold room
Glowed with warmth.

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Rhiannon12866 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Sep-25-03 03:41 AM
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4. Thank you...
:-)
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