I'm such a chicken...

[RevolutionaryActs]

I was going to post a poem over in the writers forums, but then I chickened out. Because I don't think my poems are very good, and no one will like them and then they'll laugh at me. :cry:

OK so maybe it wouldn't be that bad... but I'm still scared. x(


</silly rant>

[AverageJoe]

1. Don't be scared

You are among friends. :-)

[JohnKleeb]

2. Dude your poems are probably fine

[RevolutionaryActs]

4. But, they're silly, and short, and dumb.

HAHAHAHAHAHA

[JohnKleeb]

6. Rev would you like to read some of my poetry?

If you like, I'll pm it you.

[RevolutionaryActs]

11. Ok send me one.

:)

[JohnKleeb]

13. Am I romantic or just stupid? or cute?

[RevolutionaryActs]

14. Cute! that was so sweet!

Awwwwww :hug:

[JohnKleeb]

15. Yep its not for anyone in particular honestly

Since the one I wanna ask right now isn't a fellow darkey blue eye, but hey darkey blue eye is cool!

[RevolutionaryActs]

16. LOL

:)

[JohnKleeb]

I am not that vain honestly

but I think having dark ass hair like I do with blue eyes is attractive, :shrug: if you ever see me get vain, it will because of my eyes, of course its all sarcasm. I thikn I got nice legs too :D.

[RevolutionaryActs]

18. And I'm sure your nice legs would look great in a....... sp.......

Southern bell dress! :evilgrin:


Did you think I was going to say... that other thing? }(

[JohnKleeb]

20. hah I am sure they would too

I can do burst runs quite well, thank you!

[tcfrogs]

3. Do it, RA04

Life is too short - I know it's a cliche, but who gives a fuck, at least you're trying what you like to do.

Oh, and we'll high-five you or hug you when you get the responses, just for support.

[progmom]

5. did you see my dare in your other thread?

[RevolutionaryActs]

7. No. Where?

Show me. :D

[progmom]

8. here

http://www.democraticunderground.com/discuss/duboard.php?az=show_mesg&forum=105&topic_id=2599772&mesg_id=2600231

[RevolutionaryActs]

9. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!

You're so evil! I wuv you! :loveya:

[progmom]

10. soooo.....?

I'm going to bed. I better see your handiwork by morning! :evilgrin:

[RevolutionaryActs]

12. :-p

It wasn't a dare for moi, it was a dare for mike_c, since he wouldn't post who would like to meet....... but I doubt he'll do the dare. :cry:

[pres2032]

17. aw, come on, i'm sure they're great!

I'd love to read them. :hug:

[RevolutionaryActs]

19. Great, mediocre..... it's all the same right?

:silly:

[pres2032]

21. you're too humble

and i can't tell if i can't read them *hint, hint* ;-)

[RevolutionaryActs]

22. Fine....

Here's one... first one I ever wrote:

Hero's

Why do you hate
Why do we hurt
Why do you kill
Is this your will
There are no good knights
Tell me is this right
How can we keep this pace
When did this all become a race
You all want to get paid
But all that fades
Into zero
Now can you tell me where are
The hero’s?



Edit: *stalks away in fear*

[pres2032]

23. wow, that is great

have you ever thought of putting that to music?

[RevolutionaryActs]

24. :blush: you're too kind.

No I have not. Would it make a good rock anthem? :silly:

[pres2032]

25. aw, you're too cute

hm, i wasn't thinking of a rock anthem, but that actually is much better than what i was thinking. A bob dylan-esque folk song is what came to mind, but a rock anthem would be awsome!

[RevolutionaryActs]

26. That would work too.

So all I need to do is add some more verses, and get a band to sing it......... easy peasy. :crazy:

[pres2032]

29. hehe, sure, no problem!

you go to college don't you? someone there has got to play guitar and what if you added your other poems for the other verses?

[JohnKleeb]

27. thats good

[RevolutionaryActs]

28. Oh....

Honestly all these compliments are going to go to my head....

[JohnKleeb]

30. Youre easily humbled

as am I.

[RevolutionaryActs]

31. Yup hehe

:)

[JohnKleeb]

32. remember a bit of philo I learned the other day

You aint better than anyone else but you aint worse than no one else either.

[RevolutionaryActs]

33. I like that

I was going to to say "I may be humble, but I know what I'm worth"(whatever the hell that means) but I decided not to... well there I said it now. :silly: