I just wrote a poem(thingy) and I have NO idea what it's about....

[RevolutionaryActs]

I have no clue what it means, I always know what my poems(or other things) are about, either something silly or not, this one I have no clue. :shrug:


Anger, angst.
Depression, depredation.
Grim, gloom.

Wanting change, fear has its hold.
Wishing for faith, there is no solace in the truth.
Cries in the dark, for no one to hear.

Brave coward, everyone’s friend.

Saying yes when I should say no.
Saying no when I should say yes.
Never understanding.
Why I do what I do.

Home has changed.
Isolation is what I feel.
Joy has left for now.
Keep it close.

What comes is yet to see.
What goes is never to return.
I see what I want.
It’s not what I get.

Lost in my mind.
Not my own pain.
Quit now.
Resting in shame.
Saving my heart for no one.

The time has come.
Under the sun.
Villain of my head.
Where did I come from, where do I go?

No more of this.
No more of me.
No more of you.

I stow away, waiting for it to change.
Hoping my fear has gone.

I look, I see, I feel.
Strength is with me now.
I wait for the dawning of tomorrow.
For that is a new day.


:shrug:

[datasuspect]

1. whoa

heavy

i hear ya on the whole change thing . . .

i'm still waiting for that fabric softener commercial vision of the golden tomorrow that i had proposed for myself so many years ago.

[RevolutionaryActs]

4. Change.... bleh.

Lots of change in my life at the moment. *sigh*

[johnnie]

2. Well, that's intense

It's pretty good, and I seem to see a little angst in there...lol. A funny thing, I have written a lot of songs that became much more clear to me as to what I was thinking at the time long after I had written them. Some even became more true as time went on.
Wait for it..wait for it..wait for it.

[RevolutionaryActs]

3. lol. Well yeah... I was/am feeling sad just about... everything...

so I get that, but I didn't realize I was that sad! :silly: