Thoughts?? Advice?? Critique?? (PIC Created By MOI)

[matcom]

submitted to the DU shirt contest, inspired by youspeakmylanguage who requested it.

what needs improving?

thanks.

[mainegreen]

1. umm, thats a mighty big keyboard!

Get that custom made? Looks to be 3 feet long!

[matcom]

5. so, less of it showing?

:shrug:

[mainegreen]

7. No, I like it.

I just couldn't resist. I mean, could you imagine a keyboard that big? Its a geeks dream come true!

[matcom]

17. thank you

[havocmom]

2. Took me a few seconds to get it

I like it.

Edited to add: Might add somewhere 'blog for peace' or something like that.

[samplegirl]

4. I think

Its outstanding!

[unhappycamper]

3. Got a version with color?

Green uniforms and bright flowers make a nice contrast. Sand colored M1A1's are sexy.

[matcom]

6. no they aren't. lived on one

:D

seriously, the flower power pic i can only find in bw so i thought i would keep the theme

[unhappycamper]

8. Makes sense. Great collage.

[Rainbowreflect]

9. Great!

[MuseRider]

10. Outstanding matcom!

It took me a second but once I got it, just WOW! Great job. :applause:

[DS1]

11. Can you find a way to have more kboards jammed in the barrel?

Otherwise people might just think you're advertising some elite hacking unit, keyboard shooting tanks and all that.

End $.02

[matcom]

12. interesting

thanks.

might be tough with that particular tank pic. let me think about that

[Redstone]

13. Two things...

1) Replace the ellipsis after "today" with a period. Makes more sense that way. When you put the ellipsis after "today," people expect to seemore, maybe a "tomorrow" picture.

2) I don't think DU will be able to use that pciture on a T-shirt without getting permission and paying royalties.

Redstoen

[matcom]

14. good point

as for the rights, i think its a freebie these days. seems to be widely used on all sorts of stuff i found (could be wrong though)

[DS1]

15. Got anything from your time 'in' that can be masked over a plain bground?

[matcom]

16. probably

but that takes work :D

i think he is referring to the flower power shot

[DS1]

18. oh, and another thing, I think the url of this site looks much more

elegant in lowercase.

[matcom]

19. shut up!

just shut up. :D

[DS1]

20. unplug his keyboard!

break his fingers!

disable his reply button

[matcom]

21. FASCIST!!!

:P

[DS1]

22. Over the line!

[matcom]

23. why don't you go Democratize your OWN neighborhood?

stay the HELL outta MINE!

[DS1]

24. I have to wait until the registration clears

:nuke:

[matcom]

25. good idea

don't drive illegally

[CatWoman]

26. I honestly thought you were going to put Martin or David's

"member" down that barrel

:D

[El Fuego]

27. AWESOME!!!!

Brilliant concept. I saw your thread earlier asking about the 60s photo, now I know why. Great job!

[matcom]

28. lol

thank you