I am suppose to be writing.....

[WCGreen]

But I am posting here instead......

[LeighAnn]

1. What are you supposed to be writing? Maybe we can help.

Report? Short story? Between the lot of us, we ought to be able to come up with something pretty important.

[WCGreen]

2. Really.....

I am almost done. It's something about going home because I forgot the name of the girl who deflowered me......

[tjdee]

3. So she was really memorable is what you're saying.

:silly:

[WCGreen]

5. She actually was, it was a very tender moment.....

But I just blanked out on her name the other day...

And so I got to thinking about going home, and what if you went home and it was gone, the house I mean....

[Wetzelbill]

6. hell, I had to be told her name months later

that was not my most progressive moment. (alcohol is a bad thing)

[WCGreen]

9. Very bad and wicked

but, for alcohol, the population would probably be a lot smaller....

[Wetzelbill]

14. not my proudest moment

I wish it could have been more meaningful. It was 7 AM, I was just going to bed, passing out at a party when my parent's were out of town, and somebody climbed in bed next to me. I thought it was one of my friends looking for a bed to crash in, no big deal. I didn't even open my eyes until whoever it was started cuddling up to me. I open my eyes and see a good looking woman and well.....

7:05.... it happened. Not very romantic at all. :)

[WCGreen]

18. She seduced me.....

With her eyes....

An older woman, she all of seventeen and me a trembling sixteen year old who never expected something like this too happen...

I was geeky, pimply and hung out with some of the best looking guys you would ever see.....

I think they purposely had me around cause I made them all of four of them look oh so much better....

So there I was, one town over and at a party I didn't know anyone, except those that brought me. One of those Friend of my cousin's cousin type of deals that usually turns out tragic as alcohol and school rivalry overtakes rationality..

She saw me, she was a vision, and told me, looking straight into my eye, that I have been watching you....

She walked away, a slight sway to her hips, a tip of the head, her hair falling over to the side, exposing the back of her neck to me...

For once I didn't care what my friends would say or how much they would get on me for going after a "North Olmsted" girl.....

[Wetzelbill]

20. oh nicely written

I like that.

[WCGreen]

21. That was my right now impression....

When I get the whole thing done, it will include something like that and a variation on the Thomas Wolfe you can never go home again theme

[CaliforniaPeggy]

22. Wow...look at that!

In just a few words, a handful really, you have caught her spirit and sexuality....

You have made her real... I mean, I can see her walking away and you going after her...


Looks very good indeed, my dear WC......


I think this will be an excellent story...


:yourock: :hug:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

4. Well, this is writing....sort of...isn't it?

You always write so beautifully, my dear WC....

Your stories are involving, detailed and true...


Every time I read something that you've written, I end up wanting more of it...

I want a whole book's worth of stories!


:yourock: :loveya:

[WCGreen]

7. Why thank you my dear sweet peggy....

That is the nicest thing anyone has said to me in a very long time...

[LeighAnn]

8. Yeah, so where are all these writings at?

You got a website or something? I'm intrigued.

[WCGreen]

10. Not yet. that is what I am working on right now...

I wrote for a weekly magazine here in Cleveland but now I am trying to write more personal essays and short stories....

[tjdee]

12. Oh yeah? Then how come Wetzelbill and California Peggy get to read some?

Huh?

You got some 'splainin to do..... you got some super secret club or something?

:cry:

on edit:

OHO! I found these writings. :)

[CaliforniaPeggy]

16. It's God's own truth, my dear WC......

:hug: :loveya:

[Wetzelbill]

11. that's what I've been telling him

he needs to write a book about all this stuff.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

13. You are so very right, my dear Wetzelbill...

And he just might do it....

Wouldn't that be great?


Good to see you, BTW!


:pals:

[Wetzelbill]

19. good to see you too

[WCGreen]

15. Since my "brush" with death last year.....

I have been spending a lot of time writing down my thoughts, experiences......

I have put a few of them out in pretty raw form Here on DU and everyone who comments, including you my friend, have been encouraging me to get it all down...

And now that I have come face to face with mortality, I feel it is a good thing.....

[CaliforniaPeggy]

17. You have an enormous treasure trove of stories inside you....

And the time is right to let them out on paper...

Let them see the light of day...make some use of them...

Exorcise some of your demons....and make them pay for the pain they've caused you...

You have such a gift...it's almost obligatory to make use of it!


:hug: :pals: