Something I wrote for my comp class

[Science Of Myth]

"Signs Of An Abusive Relationship"

I want to change you
I want to mute you
I want to turn you off
I want to cancel you
...
Please take me back, baby


The instruction was to write about an everyday household object and its significance in my life and it was an in-class assignment. I'm starting to regret my submission a little lol

EDIT: I won't find out anything til tomorrow, but my ENG instructors always seem to downgrade me (rofl) and I imagine he was expecting something a bit...lengthier?

[TheBaldyMan]

1. brevity is the soul of wit n/t

[bigwillq]

2. I think it's good.

Simple and to the point. It's a clear thought. I think we all know what you're talking about there.


BTW, Welcome to DU! :hi:

[DS1]

3. Sounds like me watching The Sopranos

[Droopy]

4. I like your poem

If your instructor wanted something lengthier he/she should have said so. A good poem doesn't have to be 2000 words.

[Science Of Myth]

5. I appreciate the sentiment

but the D- on my last effort is still lingering I guess in my head :(