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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-14-06 08:02 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Tue 3/14/06)
Consummation Of Grief

I even hear the mountains
the way they laugh
up and down their blue sides
and down in the water
the fish cry
and the water
is their tears.
I listen to the water
on nights I drink away
and the sadness becomes so great
I hear it in my clock
it becomes knobs upon my dresser
it becomes paper on the floor
it becomes a shoehorn
a laundry ticket
it becomes
cigarette smoke
climbing a chapel of dark vines. . .
it matters little
very little love is not so bad
or very little life
what counts
is waiting on walls
I was born for this
I was born to hustle roses down the avenues of the dead.

Charles Bukowski

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RL

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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-14-06 10:40 AM
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1. ...
:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-14-06 01:06 PM
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5. ...
:hug:

RL
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-14-06 10:50 AM
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2. Bukowski again? Very prolific poet, I like this one especially
the first and last lines...
:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-14-06 01:07 PM
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6. Love Bukowski...
:hi:

RL
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bigwillq Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-14-06 10:51 AM
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3. Hey Retro!
Thanks for sharing this poem! :hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-14-06 01:07 PM
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7. anytime!
:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-14-06 11:37 AM
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4. My dear RetroLounge......
Thank you for this one......

I love these vivid images.....so clear and true, that they speak to me...

I've had some small share of grief, too...

But nothing this overwhelming, I think.......

At least in retrospect..........:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-14-06 01:09 PM
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8. ...
:hi:

:hug:

RL
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