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Peter Frank Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Apr-08-06 04:03 AM
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My Work in Progress...
I know it's marketing suicide to publish unfinished works; but I just finished lyrics to the chorus of a song & want honest input. (Besides, if anyone steals my lines -- I'm on record here :) )


This verse came from thinking for too long that my past had more power than my present existence:

Every day is a snapshot

Of the waters moving underneath the bridge

Today is yesterday’s tomorrow

I seize all days …I seize today



(I know this is short, but I won't give everything away ;) )



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