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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Mar-10-07 10:19 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Sat 3/10/2007)
Last-Minute Message For a Time Capsule

I have to tell you this, whoever you are:
that on one summer morning here, the ocean
pounded in on tumbledown breakers,
a south wind, bustling along the shore,
whipped the froth into little rainbows,
and a reckless gull swept down the beach
as if to fly were everything it needed.
I thought of your hovering saucers,
looking for clues, and I wanted to write this down,
so it wouldn't be lost forever -
that once upon a time we had
meadows here, and astonishing things,
swans and frogs and luna moths
and blue skies that could stagger your heart.
We could have had them still,
and welcomed you to earth, but
we also had the righteous ones
who worshipped the True Faith, and Holy War.
When you go home to your shining galaxy,
say that what you learned
from this dead and barren place is
to beware the righteous ones.

Philip Appleman

****************

RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Mar-10-07 12:25 PM
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1. My dear Retro........
Wow, what a message this is!

Funny though.....I had to read it out loud to get it!

It is beautiful, and scary all at once......

Thank you! :hug:
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Mar-10-07 12:27 PM
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2. Excellent
And so very very true and frightening.

:thumbsup:

"to beware the righteous ones." I like that line.
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Mrs Robeson Donating Member (108 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Mar-10-07 12:28 PM
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3. Bravo!!!
Stated beautifully. :thumbsup: :hi:
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zingaro Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Mar-10-07 12:53 PM
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4. That deserves an Amen, don't you think?
:hi: oh the irony :rofl:
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Mar-11-07 01:46 AM
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5. right on!!! phillip appleman!!! right on!!!
:headbang:
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