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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-26-07 07:13 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Tue 6/26/2007)
Here's two poems today for my son, who turns 9 today...

Rites of Passage

As the guests arrive at my son's party
they gather in the living room--
short men, men in first grade
with smooth jaws and chins.
Hands in pockets, they stand around
jostling, jockeying for place, small fights
breaking out and calming. One says to another
How old are you? Six. I'm seven. So?
They eye each other, seeing themselves
tiny in the other's pupils. They clear their
throats a lot, a room of small bankers,
they fold their arms and frown. I could beat you
up, a seven says to a six,
the dark cake, round and heavy as a
turret, behind them on the table. My son,
freckles like specks of nutmeg on his cheeks,
chest narrow as the balsa keel of a
model boat, long hands
cool and thin as the day they guided him
out of me, speaks up as a host
for the sake of the group.
We could easily kill a two-year-old,
he says in his clear voice. The other
men agree, they clear their throats
like Generals, they relax and get down to
playing war, celebrating my son's life.


My Son The Man

Suddenly his shoulders get a lot wider,
the way Houdini would expand his body
while people were putting him in chains. It seems
no time since I would help him to put on his sleeper,
guide his calves into the gold interior,
zip him up and toss him up and
catch his weight. I cannot imagine him
no longer a child, and I know I must get ready,
get over my fear of men now my son
is going to be one. This was not
what I had in mind when he pressed up through me like a
sealed trunk through the ice of the Hudson,
snapped the padlock, unsnaked the chains,
and appeared in my arms. Now he looks at me
the way Houdini studied a box
to learn the way out, then smiled and let himself be manacled.

Sharon Olds

****************

RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-26-07 09:08 AM
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1. did i miss you yesterday? is that why we get a twofer today?
thanks retro :yourock:

:donut:

:hi:
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-26-07 09:09 AM
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2. It is his sons b-day
that is why i would guess. :hi:
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-26-07 09:14 AM
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4. does his son and redstone's son have the same b'day
:shrug:

:hi:
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-26-07 09:16 AM
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5. I have no idea
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-26-07 09:19 AM
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6. oh -- i can't read
i need more coffee:dunce:
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-26-07 11:32 AM
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7. me to I been dragging ass all day
:D
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-26-07 01:22 PM
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8. Couldn't decide which, so I posted 2 for the boy today...
:hi:

RL
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-26-07 09:13 AM
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3. Nice
Happy Birthday RetroBoy!!

:party:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-26-07 10:22 PM
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9. My dear Retro...
I'm sorry to be so late to your thread today......Had a few other things on my mind!

These are wonderful, and so appropriate!

I especially like "My Son the Man."

Even though I never had a son, this poem speaks to me...

Especially this verse:

...I know I must get ready,
get over my fear of men now my son
is going to be one. ...


Thank you...:hug:
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