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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 12:05 PM Original message |
Feedback, please! I haven't written a sonnet in many, many years... |
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redqueen (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 12:06 PM Response to Original message |
1. Brilliant! |
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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 12:25 PM Response to Reply #1 |
6. Aw, shucks! |
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tigereye (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 12:09 PM Response to Original message |
2. ah |
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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 12:24 PM Response to Reply #2 |
5. Thank you, thank you |
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quip (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 12:15 PM Response to Original message |
3. You are indeed the Poet Laureate of the Lounge! |
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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 12:25 PM Response to Reply #3 |
7. Now, there's no need for that |
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quip (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 12:47 PM Response to Reply #7 |
10. Should the three boys be bearing Gold, Common Sense, and Fur? |
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Inchworm (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 12:16 PM Response to Original message |
4. hehe |
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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 12:26 PM Response to Reply #4 |
8. It's good to practice now and again |
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Dora (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 12:45 PM Response to Original message |
9. My good, good man. |
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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 01:07 PM Response to Reply #9 |
11. Very kind |
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DarkTirade (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 02:32 PM Response to Original message |
12. Well, you're no Shakespear... :) |
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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 03:18 PM Response to Reply #12 |
13. Feh! |
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TZ (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 04:36 PM Response to Original message |
14. Okay that actually is kind of clever BUT...... |
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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 05:01 PM Response to Reply #14 |
15. That sounds like a heck of a department |
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TZ (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 05:06 PM Response to Reply #15 |
16. btw..want to know a scary sight.? |
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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 05:21 PM Response to Reply #16 |
17. I hope that no one tapped into the company's stash of Thimerosal |
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Orsino (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 06:33 PM Response to Original message |
18. This call-back makes *'s reign pale... |
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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Dec-01-07 12:32 AM Response to Reply #18 |
20. A limerick is high praise, indeed, |
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quip (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Nov-30-07 10:23 PM Response to Original message |
19. A kick for the Bard! |
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Aristus (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Dec-01-07 12:52 AM Response to Original message |
21. Best sonnet EV-er! |
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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Dec-01-07 10:47 PM Response to Original message |
22. Forgive a kick for a slight reworking |
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