The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Sun 12/14/2008)

[RetroLounge]

The Look of It

Make it December. Leave her speechless
on the bed in the linen-colored morning light.
Supply the details: air cool as a lizard’s back,
blankets thrown to the floor, door swinging wildly
on its hinges from the man’s leaving.
Fill the empty spaces with the slap of bedcovers
thrown back, the smell of lime soap,
click-open of a folding knife, bruises mapped
purple-black across her legs.

Take from her the whirring hush of sleep,
the sweet smell of gas heat in winter,
the clean water rush from the faucet.
Now let her ease out of bed,
soak her gown in the sink. Watch the shadows
of pear trees shake at the window like bodies.

Jennifer Whitaker

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Jennifer Whitaker is a lecturer in English and assistant director of the University Writing Center at the University of North Carolina at Greensboro. Her poetry has appeared or is forthcoming in Mid-American Review, New England Review and Pebble Lake Review. She has won an Academy of American Poets prize and two Dorothy Sargent Rosenberg prizes, and serves as an assistant poetry editor for storySouth.

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:hi:

RL

[blueraven95]

1. wow

:hi:

[RetroLounge]

2. Yeah, it really pulled me in...

from the first line, I was hooked.

:hi:

RL

[Tuesday Afternoon]

3. Did she just get beaten?

or is this metaphorical for something else?:shrug: :donut: :hi:

[RetroLounge]

6. I think some violence is implied, yes...

:scared:

RL

[Chorophyll]

4. Wait...

what? Rape? Nightmare?

[RetroLounge]

7. I think rape.

Damn. That's a harsh poem.

:cry:

RL

[Chorophyll]

9. It is harsh.

Seems like the perpetrator wasn't a stranger, either. And there's something very resigned about the woman getting out of bed and washing out her nightgown. :(

[RetroLounge]

11. Yeah, the more I read it, the more disturbing it becomes.

:(

RL

[Chorophyll]

13. ...

...there you were just digging the language, and I had to come along and get all "Law and Order" up in there... sorry... :blush:

[RetroLounge]

14. get all "Law and Order" up in there

:rofl:

Now the music is in my head from the begininning of the show.

:D

RL

[Chorophyll]

15. Dah-DUM. nt

[RetroLounge]

16. Exactly!

:D

RL

[CaliforniaPeggy]

5. My dear Retro!

Beautiful, lyrical...

And brutal.

I'm not sure what happened here, but it's very compelling reading...

Thank you!

:hi:

[RetroLounge]

:hi:

RL

[BlueIris]

10. Yowza. Excellent! nt

[RetroLounge]

12. Yeah

:(

RL