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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-10-09 09:04 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Sat 1/10/2009)
Whatever It Was

Whatever it was that made you stop last night,
go limp and flop, all the air suddenly taken
from your sex like a sprung tire—exhaustion,
routine, the artifice between our skins.
Whatever made me flee
the house like Zorro, pause
at an abandoned yard nearby
to cleave wanton fruit off branches
like corsets from their owners.
Whatever it was, it’s nice to be
curled this morning, naked
on your lap, lit up fuzz of your thighs
tickling me underneath,
the tang of a new plum
ripe in my mouth,
sweet and firm with possibility.

Michelle Bitting

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:hi:

RL
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blueraven95 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-10-09 10:26 AM
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-10-09 02:03 PM
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:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-10-09 12:19 PM
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2. Good morning, my dear Retro!
Mmmmmmmmm...

Very nice...

You could even say delicious...

Thank you!

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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-10-09 05:36 PM
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RL
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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-10-09 01:36 PM
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Hope springs eternal. :P

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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-10-09 06:40 PM
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6. Hey you!
:hi:

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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jan-10-09 08:22 PM
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7. Excellent! nt
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-11-09 01:03 AM
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:hi:

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