My newest poem...Untitled...

[CaliforniaPeggy]

You bend over your guitar
Plucking, strumming
Making the music of dreams
Bending over the woman
Making her dream
Making her moan
As you play
As your fingers move
Within her rhythms
As she moves in time
To your finger’s
Touch

The melodies are tender
Promising
As you strum
Her hair falls over the strings
She delights you
With her song
Sung from her heart
As you strum
her

[PaddyBlueEyes]

1. Thats awesome Peg...

It makes me think of... *sigh* you know..

[CaliforniaPeggy]

2. My dear PaddyBlueEyes...

Yes, sweetie...

I know who...

And don't you play the guitar?

Thanks for the compliment!

:hug:

[PaddyBlueEyes]

3. I dont play the guitar

but MccTaTas oldest daughter does..and she is amazing.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

5. Ah, OK...

This poem was inspired by some wonderful classical guitar I heard on the radio...

[PaddyBlueEyes]

7. You should hear her play

She sits and listens to a song on the radio...grabs her guitar and plays the song she just heard..

[crimsonblue]

4. dayyyamn...

the little blue pill must be kind to Mr CaliforniaPeggy. :P

Hi Peggy! :hi:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

6. My dear crimsonblue!

Thank you, sweetie...

Oh yes...

;-)

[emilyg]

8. Wonderful Sensual.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

9. Thank you, my dear emilyg...

The music I heard really triggered me...

[BanTheGOP]

10. Peggy..it's ENTHRALLING...

...your sonnet has hit the mark.

A poem as subtle, yet sensual, and fee,
With music and passion in full force,
Has awakened his own spirits, and his desires,
His own emotions harbor no remorse.

He strives to touch her precocious, salacious mood,
His sounds of the guitar so enthralling,
But for his own commitment to trust,
He senses his own erotic calling.

To engage in her music, to dance and to sway,
Their bodies moving with direction, oh dear,
They move closer, their bodies in bonding,
As suddenly their motions become clear.

As they move toward crescendo, their ultimate goal
In unfettered undulations and pleasure,
There is no holding back, their thrusts of their spasms,
Completely enraptured beyond all measure.

Their bodies consumed, with the dance and the beat,
Strumming to her beat, with their hearts in step,
They engender themselves to be kind to their passions,
And finally, their happiness is happy, they wept.

With unadulterated joy, and post-pleasure bliss!

(Hope you like my continuation!)

[CaliforniaPeggy]

11. My dear BanTheGOP!

Wow! Your continuation is wonderful!

Rather a different style than mine, but still wonderful!

If mine is a sonnet, then that's strictly accidental...

I have a very hard time writing those.

Thank you for your compliments, sweetie!

[crimsonblue]

12. kicking back to the top of the Lounge.

:D

[bluesbassman]

13. Ohhh Peggy!

As a guitarist, let me say that you just struck a chord in me. Bravo!:applause:

BTW, reminds me a joke. I'll have to tell it sometime....

[CaliforniaPeggy]

15. My dear bluesbassman!

Oh, I'm so glad to hear that!

The poem was inspired by a wonderful piece of classical guitar...It just blew me away...

I'd love to hear the joke...sometime!

Thanks, sweetie!

:hug:

[bluesbassman]

17. Classical guitar can do that to a person...

I want more people to see you poem so I'll save the joke for another thread. Don't want to get this one locked!:evilgrin:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

18. I often respond to classical music this way...

But I've never been this eloquent before!

I appreciate your discretion about the joke, sweetie...:hug:

[UrbScotty]

14. My dear CaliforniaPeggy!

Thank you for sharing with us this musical addition to your poetic collection!

[CaliforniaPeggy]

16. My dear UrbScotty!

Ah, sweetie...

You are entirely welcome!

:hug:

[BlueIris]

19. Ms. C-Peg! My eyes are burning!

Nice work, though.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

24. My dear BlueIris...

Thank you so much...

Praise from a real poet always means a lot...

[Dystopian]

20. Peggy, this is beautiful

You brought tears to my eyes...My youngest son is a raging metal guitarist...
And behind closed doors he plays classical music...just Jonas and his guitar.
This also brought back memories of my first love, a guitarist...and the first and only man to ever leave me. I was only 18 years old. He left without a trace to become a 'rock and roll' star. He was awesome...But with that experience came my way of life...I've walked away from every man in my life since then....I refuse to relive that experience..and so I go...
All this from your poem...what I felt.


Look what you made me write!:hug:
You're a beautiful poet..:loveya:

peace~

[CaliforniaPeggy]

25. My dear Dystopian!

Ah, sweetie...

I had no idea.

Thank you for opening your heart and sharing your tender memories with me...

Thank you for your praise!


:loveya:

:hug:

[Callalily]

21. Very eloquent Peggy.

Certainly full of (ahem) stimulating imagery.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

26. My dear Simply Fugue!

Indeed it is!

Thank you for your very kind words, sweetie...

:hug:

[lightningandsnow]

22. Oh, that's wonderful!

As a guitarist, I highly approve. :)

[CaliforniaPeggy]

27. My dear lightningandsnow!

Oh, I'm glad you approve!

I don't play any instruments, and so I'm never quite sure the images are right...

I did feel this one was, though...

Thank you, sweetie!

:hug:

[nuxvomica]

23. We need a smiley of someone fanning themselves...

...so that we might properly respond to posts like these. Nice work, Peggy. :D

[CaliforniaPeggy]

28. My dear nuxvomica!

That's a good thought!

Thank you...I'm so glad you enjoyed this ...

:hug:

[FloridaJudy]

29. Oh my.Where's my fan?

Very sexy, Peggy. Nice one.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

30. My dear FloridaJudy!

I thank you for your very kind remarks, sweetie...

I'm so glad you like this!

:hug:

[Haole Girl]

31. Nice!

Thank you for sharing this. :hi:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

32. My dear Haole Girl!

You know how I am about sharing!

Thanks, sweetie...I'm glad you enjoyed my little work...

:hi:

[Haole Girl]

33. I'm glad you can write so much

I seem unable to write anything worthwhile, lately, for some reason. :-(

[CaliforniaPeggy]

34. Don't be so hard on yourself...

Most of what I write is unadulterated crap...

This was the exception.

Practice makes perfect, you know!

:hug:

[Haole Girl]

35. Thanks

:hug:

[NanceGreggs]

36. You make music of your own, CalPeg ...

... a perfect blend of gentle strumming and passion inflamed.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

37. My dear Nance...

Ah, thank you, sweetie...

Your praise means so much!

Sometimes the words really do just what I want them to...

:hug:

[Parche]

38. My Dear CaliforniaPeggy

As always very good, its music to my ears!!!!
Eroticly delicious!! :woohoo::woohoo: :woohoo::hi: :hug: :hug::hug:








"World conquerors sometimes become fools, but fools never become world conquerors."

[CaliforniaPeggy]

39. My dear Parche!

Ah sweetie...

So good to see you today!

And I'm thrilled that you enjoyed my little poem...

Thank you...

:hug:

[applegrove]

40. Paints a beautiful picture peggy.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

41. Thank you, my dear applegrove...

I was striving to do just that...

[denbot]

42. Very cool.

I will show Ali tomorrow.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

43. My dear denbot...

I hope she will like it too...

Thank you, sweetie...

:hug:

[CreekDog]

44. Hubba hubba

:P

I enjoyed the poem Peggy. Great metaphor.

:hug:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

45. Thank you, my dear CreekDog...

It means a lot...

:hug: