Haiku

[Xipe Totec]

Fall dresses in reds,
a blushing apology
for Winter to come.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

1. My dear Xipe Totec!

Oh, that's lovely!

I cannot write haiku to save my life.

You should post more of this sort of thing!

Thank you, sweetie...

:hug:

ETA: And put them in your Journal!

[Xipe Totec]

9. Thank you, Miss Peggy!

Thank you, Miss Peggy!
Your opinion counts with me.
I'm glad you liked it.

[Rabrrrrrr]

2. .

Xipe Totec's pants
The gelatin, is it warped?
My, my, deer are swell.

[Xipe Totec]

3. ..

Make fun if you wish,
but one thing you can't deny,
I made you read it.

:P

[Rabrrrrrr]

4. .

Yes, you made me read
That truth is plain to see
however, you suck

:P

[Xipe Totec]

7. ..

speaking of sucking,
five six five is not haiku,
thank you for playing!

:rofl:

[Rabrrrrrr]

16. ...

I emphasized it
with the silence of absence
only fools don't see

further, in this poem
I add an additional beat
now they av'rage out

[Dr. Strange]

5. Kull Wahad-the-hell?

My son has grown fat.
Kwisatz Haderach, he is?
Looks like Orson Welles.

[Rabrrrrrr]

17. ....

Dribbles of ice cream
Spice-sicle melts down chest, thighs
Sands sticks to fat rolls.

[Ptah]

6. hmm

I want a tipped cow.

big one on her side snoring.

impossible? yes.

[Xipe Totec]

8. ...

Hey diddle diddle,
The cow jumped over the moon,
while the cat fiddled.

[Ptah]

10. [ [ [ [ [ ] ] ] ] ] ] ] [ [ [ [ [

It's a fairy tale

just like hunting them snipe birds

deedle deedle dee

[Xipe Totec]

14. ((((()))))

Bovine fixation,
fanciful speculation,
reaches tipping point.

[omega minimo]

11. .

Thinning of the veils
Xipe Totec effort fails
No fault of its own


Devil in details
Plant the seed and next year see
How DU has grown


:grouphug:

[Xipe Totec]

12. ...

No such thing as fail
as long as someone reads this,
Spring hopes eternal.

[LeftyFingerPop]

13. I think this is quite nice...

well done.

[FlyingSquirrel]

15. I am fucking bored

8 months without alcohol
I need a damn drink