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For one thing, Herbert gives us the negation of any value that Ghani might have had in Children of Dune, such that her offhanded dismissal in the current book makes it clear how irrelevant her character really was in the previous book. Sure, she's been dead for 3500 years by the time of God-Emperor, but she's diminished in Herbert's tried-and-true of method of eliminating important characters and plot-points with only a brief "by the way" sort of mention. Considering how important Ghani was claimed to be in Children, with Herbert going so far as to describe her as the only one who could understand Leto, her sudden and retroactive demotion to "incidental player" is a very clumsy bit of writing.
For another, we're supposed to believe that Leto is this transcendent, superhuman figure only incidentally affected by human emotions or concerns. And then, the very first time he meets a woman (on camera) who isn't a Bene Gesserit or a Fish Speaker, he immediately gets a de facto chubby and questions his 3,500 years of divine supremacy.
:wtf:
Of the four books I've read so far in the series, Children of Dune is the best, but it's still not great, and I can only give the series as a whole a rating of "not bad." Aside from its socio-ecological commentary, I'm baffled as to why the Dune series is revered so widely. Certainly not for the writing or the characterizations.
Again, :wtf:
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