|
...from a grad of, student activist at, and an ex-employee of UMASS.
"For almost an full year" s/an/a/
Make sure Univeristy is capitalized when referring to UMASS (second paragraph, perhaps elsewhere.)
I'd say that UMass has more than a "responsibility", rather an "obligation".
And you are straight on message. Think about comparing the workload of a grad student to that of an UMass administrator. Do so politely, but firmly (and don't go near talking about the faculty, make it very clear you are talking of administrators) -- you want to make a veiled threat to hit them publicly for being lazy bastards, but not actually start punching, just fire a warning shot. "If people knew" might be a good phrase to work in there.
Then, to counteract the "yeah, but we are in the middle of our careers and yours hasn't even started" line, point out to them that if the grad students have to choose between being able to support themselves and gaining a higher degree, there will be less and less people that choose to be grad students and instead enter the workforce with undergraduate degrees. Imply, but do not say, that if that happens, they will have to hire more faculty (you want to keep the faculty unions passive in this.)
PM me if you want some ideas on how to approach the administration.
|