I'd really like to send them the following:
To Whom It May Concern:
Having not read the book in question, I have no opinion on it.
However, I do have an opinion on the exchange I have read and
wish to offer this evaluation based on its merits. You are
welcome to read or ignore it as you choose; responses are also
welcome, although I'd ask you to state specifically if you
wish responses to be kept private. Also please note that
admonitions about my personal morality and the worth of my
life will be disregarded.
The evaluation follows.
First, please compare the following:
"But everyone is entitled to their opinion, and there is
no such thing as bad publicity." -Ms. Eccleston
and
"[I]f you claim to be as professional as you are, you
would at least volunteer to remove the negative review of
Leah's Way from your website." -Ms. Eccleston
Also, I'd like to offer in response to the statement by Ms.
Eccleston that "You judge books not on their merit but on
your own prejudicial beliefs," a breakdown of Ms. Steph's
(I do not know her last name) review with special attention
paid to those comments that may be considered as partisan:
"Leah is a terrible excuse for a protagonist ... with no
redeeming characteristics."
[Can be considered partisan only in the fact that Leah's
religion may be a redeeming characteristic.]
"[W]e know the good people because they’re clean-cut and
believe in God, and the bad characters are easily identifiable
through their shaggy hair and atheism... ."
[Can be considered partisan only if one disagrees that belief
in God makes one good and atheism makes one bad; in other
words, if one does not agree with the book's apparent
premise.]
"...their shocking belief in evolution, a theme the
author seems strangely reluctant to let go."
[Can be considered partisan if one feels the main theme of the
book should not be the wrongness of the belief in evolution.
Having not read the book, I cannot comment on whether this is,
in fact, a major theme of the book.]
"The prose is cloying and desperately overwritten."
[Cannot be considered partisan.]
"As is common in Christian fiction, the dialogue is
painfully awkward... ."
[Can be considered partisan only in that it generalizes about
Christian fiction. The evaluation that dialogue is awkward in
this particular book is not a partisan comment.]
"The pacing is poor, skipping huge chunks of time and
devoting too many pages to unimportant scenes in its rush to
tell the story of Leah’s entire life."
[Cannot be considered partisan.]
"the climactic ending is an absurdly saccharine chat
between Leah and her God"
[Can be considered partisan only if one believes that
criticizing any imagined account with God is anti-Christian.
Stating that the scene in question is absurdly saccharine is,
once again, not a partisan comment.]
"[A] Blether Fiction Award simply means that an amateur
reviewer judged the book to be a 9/10."
[Cannot be considered partisan; additionally, can only be
considered inaccurate if the reviewer in question was or has
been paid for his or her reviews of this or other
publications.]
"Leah’s Way is a perfect example of crucifiction,
ignoring plot and character development in favor of beating
readers over the head with a religious message."
[Can only be considered partisan if one believes that no book
with a religious message can be low-quality.]
Thank you for your consideration. Please feel free to respond
given the caveats listed above.