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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-30-05 12:45 PM
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with apoligies to Bob Dylan
rough (like Tina's Proud Mary) draft

I cut out my heart today
I was looking for my soul
but, No I did not find it
Just left a bloody hole

I cut out my guts
looking for it there
but, No I did not find it
beginning to wonder if I care

I think my brain is the problem
so I sliced it thin with a knife
my soul I did not find it
and yet I am still alive

I thought I heard it calling
was it blowing in the wind
but, No I did not find it
for all the money I did spend

is it the whisper of a tear drop
trailing softly down my cheek
but, No I can not find it
It is my soul that I seek

or is it with my shadow
then it is there I must go
I promise to wait silently
until I see it blow
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Sep-01-05 08:12 AM
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1. typo, too late for edit
the last line should read
" until I see it GLOW "
:banghead:
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