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oneighty Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Sep-09-05 06:48 PM
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The continuing epic tale of KAZUKO
I hear from afar the Siren's song
And high on her waves I fly
And quick at last she wrecks me fast
On the shores of the Nipponese.

The girls come to my table and sit with me. They want me to buy them drinks. I do not know what to do so I refuse. A pretty girl with kind eyes rubs my short cut hair and head. She is saying something like "Cuti Cuti". They are teasing me I decide. Except the one with the soft kind eyes. She is not teasing me.

Having learned my name the kind eyed girl takes my hand. "Come Eddie san." I follow her a long way to a small house.In a room there are two beds separated by a curtain. A sailor and a girl quietly occupy one bed.

The kind eyed girl and I watch each other as we slowly remove our clothing then we lay together, we cling together, we move slowly together. She smells and tastes sweetly of all the dreams I have ever dreamed. She fits perfect to my body as if I were made for her. She is my Siren. She is the one that sang to me the Siren's Song in those dreams I dreamed in the dark nights of my lonely childhood.

Her name is Kazuko and at last I have come to her.

From 'Kazuko'

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JitterbugPerfume Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Sep-09-05 06:53 PM
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1. absolutely beautiful
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oneighty Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-18-05 05:41 PM
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2. Thank you Jitterbug
And the finished short story of 'KAZUKO and eddie' is off to the printers tomorrow. The first printing will be about twenty copies.

Get em while they are hot!

And thanks to those of you kind enough to make comments and suggestions. Especially Orexx and my friend Jitterbug.

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JitterbugPerfume Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-18-05 06:22 PM
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3. Thank YOU Ed
the Kazuko story (what I have seen of it) is beautiful

I eagerly await my copy
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