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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Mar-06-06 09:45 PM
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I am the Antichrist...

I embrace the Beatitudes.

. (for even you)

I want harm to come to no man.

. (even people of color and different sexual orientation)

I believe in turning the other cheek.

. (before releasing the bombs)

I believe in humility.

. (I am not always right)

I believe in doing unto others as you would have them do unto you.

. (Not "before you do unto me.")

I am an Atheist.

. (I am no threat. We are very unorganized)

I am a Buddhist.

. (I am pacifist)

I am Man.

. (from the same Father)

I am you.

. (I am You)


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Wetzelbill Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-07-06 10:33 AM
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1. that's interesting
Short and honest. Nothing like getting to the point. It'd be nice if you added a line from the Beatitudes right after you mention them. Something like:

Blessed are the peacemakers
. (etc)




That's just something I wouldn't mind seeing. Nicely done. :)
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Katherine Brengle Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-08-06 12:28 AM
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2. I like this...
When I was reading it, it felt like there was a beat to it, and the voice in my head read the parenthetic lines like echoes...

Nice work.
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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Mar-09-06 12:35 AM
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3. Thanks, I couldn't really format it the way I intended here.
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