My newest poem....**Caution! Erotic content!**

[CaliforniaPeggy]

Such strength

The masculine facade

Sharp flashing eyes

Tender fingers and tongue


The man dominates me.

His body, his mind

Overcome me.


He strokes, and licks, and drinks me.

And then he enters


I open and yield myself

I surrender to his strength, his passion.

My mind is overcome with what I cannot tell...


But it’s wrong


I dominate him.

For at the last–who yields?


At the peak of passion

He empties the aching seed

Into me...

[SPKrazy]

1. I think this is awesome Peggy

like I said

it puts me in a mood

and it reminds me of someone very special

and I will leave it there for now...


:hug: :hug:

blu

[CaliforniaPeggy]

2. My dear Southpawkicker...

Thank you, sweetie...

Your thoughtful remarks mean a lot to me...

I hope the reminders and your mood aren't painful...

:hug: :hug:

[Fire Walk With Me]

3. Very nice!

Are you sure that you're new to poetry? :)

[CaliforniaPeggy]

4. My dear Peake!

Thanks, sweetie!

I've been writing it steadily for about the last year...

And I'm now taking a class in it, at my local community college...

There's life in this old dame yet!

:woohoo:

[Tuesday Afternoon]

5. Hello --

imagine finding you here :hi:

You "nailed" it this time ;)

:wow:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

7. My dear Tuesday Afternoon!

Thank you, sweetie...

I think so too...

:hug:

[OzarkDem]

6. Good poem!

:blush:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

8. My dear OzarkDem!

Oh, thank you, sweetie!

I thought it was one of my better ones...:hug:

[Prisoner_Number_Six]

9. For me, a dream come true.

Er, so to speak.... :evilgrin:

A different aspect of CaliforniaPeggy is revealed to the world. There's no going back.

Ain't it great! :toast:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

10. My dear Prisoner_Number_Six!

Thanks! This is a side I've always had....it's just hidden, most of the time!

I appreciate your kind remarks!

No going back is right!

:toast:

:hug:

[Callalily]

11. Oh Peggy!

Your poem is great! I'm tonally swooning!

I open and yield myself

I surrender to his strength, his passion.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

12. My dear Simply Fugue...

Thank you, sweetie...

I felt those words, and their truth, yesterday, in my poetry class...

:hug:

[Rising Phoenix]

13. sexy....nice work

I'll post some of my own someday

[CaliforniaPeggy]

14. My dear Rising Phoenix!

Glad you like it!

I'd love to see your work too...

:hug:

[Rising Phoenix]

15. I'll post some tonight....

one for you...

The summertime has a different feel.
Hot and sensuous
Ecstasy radiates off
Sweaty skin
Kissed by gentle breeze and
Perfumed by magnolias
Raining petals over
Laughing eyes
That die in the
Face of love

did that one about 15 years ago...what do you think

edited for spelling

[CaliforniaPeggy]

16. I like this one a lot!

Sad little twist at the end...

Very nice!

Thanks for sharing it...

I look forward to seeing some more...

:hug:

[Rising Phoenix]

17. thanks

I'll post some more soon

[Wheezy]

18. Thank you for the link, Peggy!

What a fluid poem (pun NOT intended). The words are perfect.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

19. My dear Wheezy!

Oh, I'm so glad you like this!

I hear you about the pun...

Thank you!

:hug:

[BlueIris]

20. Niiiiice.

Erotic poetry is difficult for me, so I want to congratulate you for successfully composing such a piece.

I hope you find a place for this out in the world; erotica is very publishable right now.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

21. My dear BlueIris!

Oh, thank you!

I really enjoy writing stuff like this...

So, you think it's publishable? I will explore this....

I really appreciate your remarks!

[WCGreen]

22. Penicillin will take care of that Aching seed....

[CaliforniaPeggy]

23. Lol!

You are too funny, as usual...

I hope you liked it....

:hi: