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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Nov-18-07 02:38 PM
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My poem....Loss...
Sharp like the winter winds


The keening

Comes up inside me

Ripping and tearing

Laying waste

To my joy


It pulls you away

It steals your love


I’m shivering

Helplessly

In the face of it


O where are you?
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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Nov-18-07 02:50 PM
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1. Very sad
Good... but sad. :hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Nov-18-07 02:57 PM
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2. My dear KC2...
Thanks, sweetie...

I was in a sad place when I wrote it...

But the words do come more easily these days...I think my poetry class is good for me...

:hug:
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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Nov-18-07 02:59 PM
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3. Poetry is its own form of therapy...
..isn't it? :hug:
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