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bridgit Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-13-09 02:21 AM
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Pull the needle from Swana's arm
I was the first one through the bathroom window, cause I was the one of us that would fit; that could still shimmy through and clamor the pungent...with Swana

Numb with chocking tears I gasped at the darling dreamy, accepting, girl I knew still slumped on her toilet seat gone from the batch that took the likes of Jerry Garcia, Michael Bloomfield, etc; others no doubt but needled, to be certain, still stuck by her Rx half dispensed gone from within her own shrieking existenistenism.....in what seemed far less than a heartbeat I pulled it from the center of my own screaming brain why? Why?

Soon they came, the CSI dudes the documentarians...the people that thought they knew her
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sybylla Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-15-09 11:58 AM
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1. Sounds like a great beginning.
Is there more? Will there be?
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