My Poem: The Wave
CaliforniaPeggy
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Tue Jan-05-10 03:05 AM
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stands on edge
caught in time
frozen yet
fluid
the perfect
upstanding curve
ready to throw itself
down
as we hold our breath
waiting
for that
curling
edge
spray
foaming
back
the wild hair
of the woman
in your bed
opening
herself
in that
perfect
curve.
© 2009 MLC
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| Haole Girl
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Mon Jan-11-10 11:53 AM
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That was unexpectedly erotic.
Thank you for sharing that, Peggy. :hi:
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Mon Jan-11-10 12:02 PM
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Thank you!
It was unexpected to me too...
I never know just where these are going to go...
So when that woman showed up? I went with it!
:D
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| Haole Girl
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Mon Jan-11-10 12:15 PM
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| 3. Did this thread get moved to the writing group? |
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I thought I was posting in the Lounge. :shrug: :crazy:
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Mon Jan-11-10 12:21 PM
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| 4. Nope, it didn't get moved. |
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I put it here, since I thought the erotic content might get it locked if I put it in the Lounge...
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Mon Jan-11-10 01:50 PM
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| 5. I must really be out of it |
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