My poem: Leave Open The Door

[CaliforniaPeggy]

Love’s
a topsy turvy mess
that will change where your life was going before
you left open
that door



© 2010 MLC

[Haole Girl]

1. I like it..

just wish there was more of it. :hi:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

2. My dear Haole Girl!

Well, it was longer, but not better!

I actually improved it by cutting.

Glad you enjoyed what there is anyway!

:hi:

[WCGreen]

3. sometimes the knife is mightier than the pen....

[CaliforniaPeggy]

4. Indeed, that certainly can be true...

And this time it was!

Hey Chris...

[Scottybeamer70]

5. Good one CaliforniaPeggy

Guess I should have posted my poem in this forum......just didn't know it was here!

[CaliforniaPeggy]

6. My dear Scottybeamer70!

Welcome to the Writing Group!

I was very pleasantly surprised at your coming by and commenting...

There's a lot of quiet forums/groups on DU.

And I'm glad you enjoyed my little work.

:hi:

[Scottybeamer70]

7. Thank you, Peggy

This might turn out to be my favorite place. I really do get tired of all the
arguing and name calling that goes on in the news groups. It gets pretty old,
and I really was thinking of just getting out of DU altogether. Maybe I'll
stay a little longer.