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ALago1 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jan-04-05 12:04 PM
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A short experimental poem
I am generally not a poet because I don't write poetry all that often.

However, this kind of flowed out of me and since it's so cryptic I can't tell if it is good or bad or somewhere inbetween. Let me know what you think!

Maestro

Maestro where art thou?
T’ween n’other plane supposed
Split between atoms
Encased within your toes

If thou art real Real
In the non-prosaic sense
Then you’ll stand through me
To reveal the Real’s intent

Hail! I swooned knowing!
T’was in blink of an eye
Maestro stood through me
T’ween n’other plane I lied

Second creation
When we are formed again
If thou stands through me
Space-time will never end.

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