Anyone want to help edit text for a video race game?

[Bonobo]

This is a professional job and I will pay.

I basically lack the knowledge to properly edit this text. Here is an example of the type of text that I am having trouble with:

"Initial Torque first puts weight on the LSD so that the LSD will not suddenly
go off at a bad time.
Raising Initial Torque suppresses the Differential Gear functions, which makes it easy to gain
traction and acceleration. However, it also tends to make it harder to turn.
Lowering Initial Torque will make the car suddenly lock up and create a possibly unstable
vehicle."

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