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From somewhere
Bee buzzing
crystallized hummingbird
hanging lazy like in warm summer air
dipping back dipping back dipping back
flower gives
off to somewhere
dipping back dipping back dipping back
flower gives
young crying
crystallized hummingbird
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Bee buzzing
resolves into a hummingbird
hanging lazy like in warm summer air
dipping back dipping back dipping back
flower gives
then off to nest
dipping back dipping back dipping back
flower gives
young crying
resolves into hummingbirds
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