A new one from me...

[CaliforniaPeggy]

Lust is an erect nipple
In your lover’s mouth

You arch your back
While he feeds on you

You nourish him
With your bounteous nipple

You fill him
With joy

As he drinks.

Funny
You are nourished
Too.

© MLC

[NanceGreggs]

1. I have been here ...

... this place of which you speak.

It is a wondrous place, and it feeds the soul.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

2. My dear Nance!

It is wondrous indeed....

I've been there too...

Thank you, sweetie...

:hug:

[Kind of Blue]

3. I think your poem is incredibly hot

because it is incredibly true. Thank you.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

4. My dear Kind of Blue!

What a terrific thing for you to say!

I thank you...

And, of course, I agree...

[NYC_SKP]

5. Good morning, California Peggy!

How do you do it?

:applause:

:donut:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

7. My dear NYC_SKP!

How do I do it?

The words just show up, and demand loudly to be written down...

It's a mystery to me...

Thank you, sweetie...

:hug:

[backtoblue]

6. Steamy!

Very nice! :blush:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

8. My dear backtoblue!

Ah, thank you!

Yup, steamy is just what showed up...so I went with it!

:hi:

[J-Lo Biafra]

9. "bounteous nipple" makes me think of Nancy Walker.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

10. My dear J-Lo Biafra...

Well, that's an unfortunate image. Sorry that's where my poem took you.

:shrug:

[UndertheOcean]

11. That is a great one CP !!!! +10

[CaliforniaPeggy]

12. My dear UndertheOcean!

I'm so pleased you enjoyed it!

I'll be reading it tonight at the open mic that I go to every week...

We'll see what they have to say!

Thank you, sweetie...

:hug:

[byronius]

13. So good.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

14. Thank you, my dear byronius...

[dgibby]

15. Wow! Just wow!

Now I have to go take a cold shower!:evilgrin:

I'm trying my hand at Haiku. Woudl love it if you would take a look and tell me what you thing. I posted on the Haiku thread and one separately. Sure isn't as easy as it looks!

[CaliforniaPeggy]

16. My dear dgibby!

Ah, thank you! Glad you like it...

I did look at your Haiku thread, and there's no way in hell I can write that!

It doesn't look one bit easy to me...

:hi:

[dgibby]

17. I'm not sure I can either! lol!

Can't hurt to try, though. At my age, I'll take risks (of embarassing myself) that I'd never have taken when I was younger! If it weren't for all the aches and pains, I could totally embrace being a serior citizen.
"Maxine" is my heroine!

Thanks for taking a look. Have no earthly idea what I'm doing, but it's fun, nonetheless!

:hi:

PS: I'm a Southerner, so have trouble limiting myself to only 3 lines!:rofl: :rofl: :rofl: