Boundaries
CaliforniaPeggy
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Sun Nov-07-10 06:32 PM
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boundaries all tucked up around me everything neatly surrounded safely guarded my hands no longer visible my eyes closed so I may not see
everything’s folded away not one hiding place is left even my hair is tucked up no flying strands lips sealed against you like a granite wall you cannot find a crevice to catch me not this time, not with me I am safe here inside my boundaries and here I will stay no further entry permitted
even my heart has gone into hiding
© 2010 MLC
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Mon Nov-08-10 12:02 PM
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A very free flowing narrative. Good job!
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Thank you!
I'm really pleased you like this, and I greatly appreciate your comments...
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