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JitterbugPerfume Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue May-03-05 06:09 PM
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If I had a Love...by Jitterbug
Edited on Tue May-03-05 06:16 PM by JitterbugPerfume
If I had a love

when it came our time

To face eternity

I would wrap my arms and legs around him

and go into the fire

and

it would not be possible

to seperate our essence--

and in a billion , billion years

when the sun explodes

and the earth

turns to dust

Some of those molecules

of carbon

flying out into the eternal darkness

would be my love and I

loving still------
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oneighty Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue May-03-05 06:13 PM
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1. Nice poem
nice thoughts Ms Jitterbug

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JitterbugPerfume Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue May-03-05 06:17 PM
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2. Why thank you
Ed
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pinerow Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-04-05 09:34 AM
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3. Ah likes it...

and with that love
we shall
live
forever...
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JitterbugPerfume Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-04-05 10:36 AM
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4. yes
live forever

thanks for liking my poem
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KaliTracy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-04-05 11:58 AM
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5. reminds me of a phoenix rising.... eternal
thank you for sharing.
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ALago1 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-04-05 09:33 PM
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6. I liked it!
I think everyone wishes they had a love like that :)
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oneighty Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-26-06 11:04 AM
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7. A kick for thoughts
to savor.

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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-09-06 11:11 PM
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8. that is SOOO romantic...
eternal flames of love *sigh*
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pinerow Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-12-07 02:27 PM
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9. I'm gonna kick this because i love the sentiment,
and we need a lot more like it...Kudos
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