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KaliTracy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-05-05 11:59 AM
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Neptune's Folly
watch me,
he says as he slices
through waves.
i catch
glimpses of flesh
through bluegreen
windows of water.

he disappears
sideways through foam.
i try to fix on his big
toe, his smooth sleek thighs,
he somersaults into another wave.

i lose sight
as my feet are pulled
from under me.
for an instant i am before birth,
buoyant yet contained,

until the wave
spits me out onto the shore.

touch me,

i hear,

follow...

but i cannot see.


tracy lynn
1992
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pinerow Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-05-05 12:12 PM
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1. Very nice
nt
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oneighty Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-05-05 03:18 PM
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2. You better be careful
KaliTracy. Keep yer eyes on the big toe.

Hee hee hee.

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KaliTracy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-05-05 07:42 PM
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3. LOL
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