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Steel City Slim Donating Member (410 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-06-05 11:09 AM
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Saturday Night
I wrote this poem during a fucked up time in my life. I was drinking too much, smoking too much dope, I was having an afair with a married woman. I was a mess, and my life was a mess.

Saturday Night

The winter's cold
And the hawk is flyin'
And lies are bein' told
And soon someone'll be cryin'
But no one cares
It's just a personal tradgedy
Back door Johnny's runnin' scared
And it's lonely on the street
Find a doorway to huddle in
Protect you from the night
Ain't no way you'll ever win
But still you gotta fight
Give the man a nickle
Get yourself real stoned
But life is often fickle
And you always wake up alone
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pinerow Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-06-05 11:30 AM
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1. I am reminded of a very cold winter...
nt
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KaliTracy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-06-05 12:03 PM
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2. there is a lot here in these words -- much that can be
felt, much that makes the reader wonder.

thanks for sharing it.
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JitterbugPerfume Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-07-05 10:57 AM
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3. that kind of desolation
has to be experienced to be understood

yes it does
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Steel City Slim Donating Member (410 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-07-05 11:54 AM
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4. I Hope
you were never there.
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