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oneighty Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-13-05 09:20 AM
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The Lover (A poem written by request)
The lover
Like spring air
Smelling of new life,
Lilacs and roses
Filters through cracks
Under doors
Beneath windows
And quietly settles
Beside you
As you sleep.
The lover kisses
The tears from
Your eyes
Draws forth
From your sweet
Mouth,the fears
Of yesterday.
He leaves
As he came.
Silent.

Jitterbug asked me to write a poem just for her.
This is her poem.

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From 'Voyages of the Vicky Mary' Copyrighted 2004
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JitterbugPerfume Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-13-05 09:27 AM
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1. thank you oneighty
my friend and confidant

(((((((((((((HUG))))))))))))
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KaliTracy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-13-05 12:00 PM
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2. beautiful
what a special gift to give -- and to receive.
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EvolvedChimp Donating Member (117 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-13-05 12:38 PM
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3. That was sweet
Now write one dedicated to the G.O.P.
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JitterbugPerfume Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-16-05 08:44 AM
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4. I cherish this poem
but not nearly a much as I cherish the writer
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pinerow Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-16-05 09:20 AM
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5. Very good...very smooth...nice flow...
nt
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