My poem.......what do you think?

[CaliforniaPeggy]

There is death here

They say you carry the seeds of your death

Inside you

I’ve just caught a glimpse of mine

A small piece of my heart

Just rolled over

And died.

And

Funny thing


I have no tears for it


Not yet anyway

[wildhorses]

1. very nice, Peg...sadness too deep for tears...

you have not yet begun to heal, I think.:hug:


here's hoping the healing comes:hug:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

2. Ah, I have begun to heal.........

But it's slow to come.........

Forward and back, forward and back, goes my heart......and my mind as well...

Thank you for your kind thoughts, my dear wildhorses........:hug: