Iraq the comma: graphic

[Taxloss]

A slightly hurried job. This is not my forte.

[silverweb]

1. I like it.

But the graphic is hard to make out with the words over it.

How about putting the words above and below -- or around -- the "comma" graphic, incorporating it into the sentence?

Example:

When the final history is written on Iraq

--graphic comma--

It will look just like a comma.

or arrange it with the words on the sides and the "comma" in the middle.

Just at thought. Otherwise, I love it.

[seabeyond]

2. without seeing the picture in the comma, reading, i thought

those lives lost is no common to either them or those that loved them. then i saw your picture in the comma..... good job

[Richard D]

3. I agree

Too difficult to see the graphic. I see a face between the A and Comma, but can't see what the rest of it is.

[Sweet Freedom]

4. Why not make the comma a drop of blood? /nt

[Tempest]

5. Here's another

http://www.gocomics.com/anntelnaes/

[silverweb]

6. Oh, wow.

Yup, that says it!