Can I get a review of this song I just wrote?

[kentuck]

:)

I'M A REPUBLICAN, BIG-BUSINESS, CRIMINAL

Gonna get me a job-
And work for Halliburton-
Gonna make a lot of money -
That is for certain.

Gonna break all the rules -
And break all the laws -
Gonna do what I want-
Just be-cause.

(Chorus)
I’m a Republican
Big-Business-
Criminal.

I don’t want my words
to be too
subliminal.

Gonna spit on the homeless-
And laugh at the poor-
Gonna wave my money-
When they knock on my door.
Gonna say that I got mine-
You got to get yours.

(Repeat chorus)
‘Cause I’m a Republican
Big-Business
Criminal

I don’t want my words
to be too
subliminal.

I’m a Republican
Big-Business
Criminal.

[Bluebear]

1. Quick, copyright it! nt

[BuyingThyme]

2. :thumbsup:

:thumbsup:

[ayeshahaqqiqa]

3. I could hear this being sung

with an acoustic guitar by Pete Seegar....no higher praise.....

[kentuck]

6. Thanks! I just wrote it on acoustic guitar with 3 chords...

I'M A REPUBLICAN, BIG-BUSINESS, CRIMINAL

D-----------------
Gonna get me a job-
----G-------------A----
And work for Halliburton-
D-----------------------
Gonna make a lot of money -
G------------A-----
That is for certain.


and go to "G" on the chorus

[Swamp Rat]

4. Love it!!!! ... What Bluebear said!!!!

:kick:

[cspanlovr]

5. Well done! I like it!

[KarenS]

7. !!

:applause:

[democrank]

8. All because of you, kentuck.....

I`m sitting here all alone sounding like a 61-year old rapper!

[Parche]

9. SONG

I am calling Toby Keith right away................ha

[durrrty libby]

10. Toby might sing it too

I was surprised to learn that Toby is a liberal dem

[Esra Star]

11. Can you get it onto You Tube.