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NewJeffCT (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Jul-23-07 09:16 AM Original message |
Please proof/critique my LTTE on the Bush veto of expanding health coverage for kids |
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Bluebear (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Jul-23-07 09:19 AM Response to Original message |
1. Just some word orders: |
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NewJeffCT (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Jul-23-07 09:37 AM Response to Reply #1 |
3. Thanks, some good tips |
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panader0 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Jul-23-07 09:20 AM Response to Original message |
2. The veto is part of his "Every child left behind" program |
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bryant69 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Jul-23-07 09:40 AM Response to Original message |
4. I'd combine the first two sentances, or drop the first sentance entirely |
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Bravo Zulu (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Jul-23-07 09:50 AM Response to Original message |
5. You motivated me to start sending LTTE and the first one is |
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