I Need Your Opinion

[lame54]

http://youtube.com/watch?v=j_jTQIDW9Qg
i was asked to come up with a commercial for a website
i have gone through many drafts and this is the latest
can you please watch and critique it?
comments on earlier drafts have been very helpful
thanks

[Th1onein]

1. For what it's worth....

I think you need to put some film footage in your piece. Print just doesn't do it well enough. You can have SOME print, but you've got entirely too much. You can also change the music. It will not appeal to everyone, and I am assuming you are playing to a broad audience? Plus, I'm not sure what your message is, just from this clip. I think you are saying to vote and to ask for paper ballots, but it's not crystal clear.

[MrMickeysMom]

2. I watched it once...

I'm not sure what the website wishes to be the message, but here's what I got...

Possible election fraud, let's do something about it... I forgot the website quickly at the end of the short and sweet video. Maybe I'd replay it to retreive that info, but I'd prefer to have the website info as the last screen frozen so that I could go right to the website.

[madokie]

3. I like it