I just made this bumpersticker - do you like it?

[Mira]

Alternative suggestions are welcome.




I just made this alternative and there was time to post it - thanks for all suggestions

[Mira]

1. I just saw it get unrecommended, I wish the person

would have told me "why".

[Gold Metal Flake]

2. The stars on the elephant are upside down.

The RNC stars point downward, not upward.

[Mira]

5. Now "don't " that just figure!!! :) You are right. I'll change it

if I end up printing them. I'm thinking of making a donation of a number of them to the local Democratic Headquarters, but want to check the reaction here, or suggestions for improvement.
Glad you caught that. Thanks.

[SargeUNN]

3. They are brain dead

We have a few knuckle draggers here.

[mikelgb]

4. hmm, no, not too sure of the flow of your message

"It's time for a word" ?

no strong message here, go for a better concept

[Mira]

9. I wanted to say

It's Our time for Your word
I might change it to that. Good recommendation.

[mikelgb]

18. that is MUCH better

good job

[H2O Man]

6. Very good!

Recommended!

[Fumesucker]

7. You used the wrong Republican icon...

This one is more accurate..

[malaise]

8. Love it

Fuck the unrecs

[xultar]

10. I don't get it What about "It's time Democrats say No!" but say no to what or whom, Obama?

[Mira]

11. I posted an alternative that may make it more clear to you on the original post

if it does not explain it, then it's not good enough either!
Thanks

[jaksavage]

12. too much thinking required

To really succeed it has to be blatantly obvious.
Keep trying :')

[glinda]

13. I think it is a bit too complicated.

[Brickbat]

14. Yeah, I don't get it either.

Frankly, it looks like it's a sticker for the Republicans, accusing the Democrats of saying no.

[Mira]

16. You may have a good point. This sort of thing,

if not crystal clear, can back fire badly.
If the idea of the word "NO" being their game is not clear to people, then the sticker won't work.

[Bitwit1234]

15. I have a good one

A scarecrow with the straw coming out of its ears..

"TYPICAL REPUBLICAN AND TEA BAG LOOSING THEIR BRAINS".

[madamesilverspurs]

17. Seems we've been playing with similar ideas...

And I'd definitely go for your second version!


K & happy to R



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[blondeatlast]

19. I mostly like but the donkey needs to look a little tougher, IMHO.

Not much--just a little less "curvy" especially in the kicking legs.

[Mira]

20. I like that better than mine. I really do. And as always

I love your donkey, now the kick has extra purpose!

[Greyskye]

21. Upon a glance it looks pro-Republican

My first impression is that it is saying that the Democrats are saying 'no'.

The Republican elephant is what seems to be sponsoring the message.

I get what you are saying when I study it. I'm just afraid that as a bumper-sticker, when you only have a few seconds to make your point, people might come away with the wrong message.

[Orsino]

22. And even if it's intended as anti-Republican, I don't think I like it.

It undercuts our important message that the other guys are the Party of No.

Now, something simpler like "Say no to the GOP" could work. It's a little bit childish, but I would have to admit to liking it.

[JackRiddler]

23. Sorry to say, but this backfires entirely and shows the Democrats as the "Party of No"

[Scurrilous]

24. K & R

:thumbsup:

[trusty elf]

25. What about something like this?

[Warren DeMontague]

26. I think you need to simplify it: "Say No To The Party Of No", or something like that.

That's what you're trying to say, no? ;-)