You are viewing an obsolete version of the DU website which is no longer
supported by the Administrators.
Visit
The New DU. Reply #5: No. I reworked it.
[View All]
SOteric
(1000+ posts)
Send PM |
Profile |
Ignore
|
Sun Jun-13-04 06:38 PM
Response to Reply #4 |
|
Mostly good. You've spelt scepticism wrong, - I fixed it. You had too many clauses in apposition in the opening sentence. I've fixed it. You overused a phrase or two, I've fixed those.
|
Powered by DCForum+ Version 1.1 Copyright 1997-2002 DCScripts.com
Software has been extensively modified by the DU administrators
Important Notices: By participating on this discussion
board, visitors agree to abide by the rules outlined on our Rules
page. Messages posted on the Democratic Underground Discussion Forums are the
opinions of the individuals who post them, and do not necessarily represent
the opinions of Democratic Underground, LLC.
Printer-friendly format
Email this thread to a friend
Bookmark this thread