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written.
In the scene the night before the indictment of the two Marines:
In the play, Kaffee, Weinberg and Galloway are arguing about their defense strategy.
Kaffee says: "...two young Marines obeying an order they never thought would cause harm."
Weinberg: "A defense that didn't work for the Nazis at Nuremberg; a defense that didn't work for Calley at My Lai..."
Kaffee: "I can't worry about the Nazis. They're not my problem right now."
Sorkin dances right up to it, but doesn't go any further. It's an awkward moment.
In the film, the scene is much better written.
Weinberg: "A defense that didn't work for the Nazis at Nuremberg; a defense that didn't work for Calley at My Lai."
Kaffee: "Jesus, Sam! These guys aren't the Nazis! They were obeying an order they never thought would result in harm!"
Galloway: (softly) "Don't look now, Danny, but you're making an argument."
Also, the *gotcha* moment in the movie was much better. In the play, it revolves around security tags on Kaffee and Weinberg's baggage at Gitmo. In the movie, it is phone calls, personal items packed or not packed, and a daring bluff with two Air Force crewmen.
In the three years or so between the premier of the play and the writing of the screenplay, Sorkin evidently figured out how to make it a better story.
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